Hey you! Haven't heard from you in a while! ^^ Anyways, let's get to the point...
Vision: Looks gorgeous, the color pallet is nice, lots of vivid colors, I personally think the background is pretty, and the poses are cute. 5/5
Originality: JulesXBernie is nothing new, but it's rendered nicely here, crossed with the idea of merhogs and/or nagas, also nothing new, but I haven't seen a lot of the two together, so well done on that! 4.5/5
Technique: Oh god, this section could go on and on and on! X3 I must agree with Aoithewolf45: YOUR STYLE IS SO ADORABLE! I absolutely love it! (Gah, I wish I could draw like you... TT *goes and bangs head against a brick wall*) For some completely odd reason, it makes me this of a cross between Tracy Yardley(!)'s style, Narcotize Nagini's (yes, THE Narcotize Nagini) style, and chibi (WTF?! XD). Love it! 5/5
Impact: Overall, nice pic, good coloring- aw crap, I didn't mention anything about the shading... Darn... Oh well, I'll do it here. It looks good! XD Anyways, um... Uh... I'm not really good at commentating about Impact, so don't listen to me... X3 5/5